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David pulled up to the library’s entrance. He closed his eyes and exhaled an exaggerated breath. Am I fooling myself, do I even have a chance?
After a minute he entered the building. The library appeared as if he were there yesterday instead of three years ago.
“Can I help you find anything,” said a middle-aged woman behind the reception desk.
“No, I know what I need,” said David.
He searched the entire first floor, but came up empty. Aisle by aisle of the second floor produced the same result. Defeated he dropped into a chair.
“David,” said a soft voice.
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Your missing an”I” from I know what need. Other than that, it’s a good start with a cliffhanger
Thanks for the catch. Enjoy your Thanksgiving.
Sometimes you have to be found rather than find…
How very true.
Ah! He did know what he needed, and I’m glad he found it. She kept the suspense going, though, didn’t she? Nicely told.
Dear Cole,
He wasn’t searching for a book was he? Glad he found her.
shalom,
Rochelle
Thanks Rochelle