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Victor pulled Brittany’s arm and yanked her out of the pink chair.
“Let go. You’re hurting my arm,” said Brittany.
His grip increased, “I got your text. It’s not over until I say so,” said Victor.
Victor started to slap her, when his hand was pinned behind his back by a man with abs visible though his t-shirt. Victor howled in pain and released Brittany’s arm.
The man said, “Apologize.”
Victor croaked, “I’m sorry.”
The man released Victor. “Now leave.”
“Brittany, this isn’t over,” said Victor and stormed off.
“Thanks…,” said Brittany.
“Harold and you’re welcome,” said the man.
Nice. You took me several different directions, I enjoyed that!
Thanks for reading.
I reckon there might be more to that in the future between Brittany and Harold… (BTW I think you need you’re rather than your in the last line.)
Claire
You were right about the you’re and your. Thanks for the catch.
Good for Harold. Too many people turn a blind eye to these violent interactions.
Yes they do. Thanks for reading.
Great little scenario. I don’t know whether you meant to write ‘croaked’, but ‘crocked’ seems like a good word to use in this context.
Thanks for catching the typo. With all my proofreading I still missed it.
She’s lucky to have a knight in shining armour come to her rescue. Nice story.
Thanks for reading.
Harold to the rescue! Nice story.
Thanks, I might continue with it next week.
I think maybe Harold is maybe not all he seems to be. Brittainy would be wise to be careful…
Lily
Careful of her knight in shining armor. What ever would make you say that.
Maybe the cynic in me. Maybe expecting a twist in the story. Sorry!
Lily
Lily,
I was being sarcastic. The story will continue.
😊
Dear Cole, Good story and Harold came to her rescue – How romantic! Good job and enjoyable! Nan 🙂
Thanks Nan. Glad you enjoyed it.